ILYASS EL MORABIT
Hello; I am Ilyass, from Morocco. I am graduate of Sociology Master. I have decided to take this course to increase my writing skills.
Location Morocco
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it was a good learning experience, I hope get other similar experiences ahead. thank you all
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Discuss the reasons why the majority of people in Morocco are seeking to immigrate abroad.
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let's get started
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Introduction
Background: Immigration abroad – decreasing work opportunities in Morroco. Hard social conditions. Europ and Canada are appearing for Majority of Moroccans as good prospects to change their Socio-economic situations.
Thesis statement This essay - main reasons for majority of Moroccans’s immigration abroad.
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Main ideas:
1.Majority of Moroccans look forward to comfortable work abroad; in Europe and Canada.
2.Majority of Moroccans try to improve their families live conditions by immigrating abroad.
Supporting evidences:
1.1 Quantitatively, in Europe and Canada, there is much more work opportunities in manifold fields: Information technology, building, social... -
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Title: Discuss the reasons why the majority of people in Morocco are seeking to immigrate abroad.
Heading question: Why do the majority of people in Morocco seek to immigrate abroad ?
1. Work opportunities are much more existed abroad.
2. Work conditions are more legal in Europe and Canada than Morocco.
3. Comfortable social and health... -
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Title: Discuss the reasons why the majority of people in Morocco are seeking to immigrate abroad.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT replied to ILYASS EL MORABIT
Thank you Miss @AnneVicary(educator), I got it.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT replied to ILYASS EL MORABIT
Sure Miss @MarthaPartridge, I was trying to say that academic writing is the official, or rather the objective, form of writing down both scientific and institutional contents; which necessitating an accurate standards. Grammar rules respected on academic writings are one of that important accurate standards.
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it was a glorious week, I've got the most of it indeed.
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the reasons why people visit my town;
Al Hoceima is a small coastal town in north of Morocco. Although it’s a rough mountainous area that hard to reach, numbers of people come to visit it in the summer because of its wonderful beaches and musical festivals that holding in. Here, we going to discuss this couple of submitted reasons.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT made a comment
well explication.
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that's clear.
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there is a large square in my home town, it's a public place which festivals and music concerts held on.
there are many beaches over coastal line of my town, that are overrun by people in the summer. -
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In my view, grammar is the important thing that makes difference between academic writing and any other writing.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT replied to ILYASS EL MORABIT
OK Mr. Turner, I'll change it. thank you for your nice tip.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT made a comment
I have learned such a useful things during this week as well former week. Hopefully, the next week will be in the same level.
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Disscuss the reasons why most people in Morocco are seeking to immigrate abroad.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT made a comment
I got it.
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Disscuss the reasons why most people in Morocco are seeking to immigrate abroad.
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I did it as the same.
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that is a clean and obvious work.
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It's such an organized essay. but in turn, it's more than 1200 letters, so we haven't got opportunity to do the same as in the end.
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ILYASS EL MORABIT made a comment
it's quite helpful to do a such organization at the beginning of each essay.
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I think special skills will have been required this week.
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it was such a helpful experience.
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Morocan society had a special social structure in the past,reflected in people daily life styles.However,there is now a plenty of changes concerning those life styles have happened.Thus,how can we give an accurate objective describe about that.In the past,after Morocco had got independence, ruling authority started building state...
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Detailed evaluation, i like it.
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Touchable improvement at all three levels for Xiao. rich content, coherent organization, delicate language.
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Good diagnosis. thank you Mrs.
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I see that Xiao has made an accurate show about his country, which inserted three significant sides of past Chine and nowadays China: political side, economic side and social side.
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understood phrases, i couldn't say more.
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i agree with you, although it's understood.
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Morocco;
Nowadays:
expensive cost of living
weak social links
women have outdoor works
Morocco have got its political independence
In the past:
cheaper cost of living
stronger social relationships
people had more confidence between each other
most women had no paid jobs
Morocco was a colonized country. -
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I am from Morocco, the country that has a big cultural diversity. Because it’s an African, Arabic, Amazigh and Islamic country.
In the last twenty years, I can say there was a stupendous changes over all round the world which Morocco was not far away from. That’s what we can notice accurately through some new ways of life inside Moroccan society. So, what... -
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I get it now, thank you.
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Good say Mrs Olga, I agree with that academic writing is associated with essay. and I am here just for that reason; best wishes.
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Actually I do not have a lot of english writing experiences, barring some rare attempts when I was at high school and in University. it was about many subjects which teachers had been told us to write something about it. I am sure those writings have fulled of grammar and vocabulary mistakes, further, structural language mistakes. In one word, it hasn’t been a...
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it sounds to be so useful :)
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Hello everyone;
I can say that this year I put two underlined goals in front of me in order to reach; get IELTS certificate and release a scientific article in such sociological magazine. for that clear reasons I have decided to take this course.
