How’s my writing?

Now you have the chance to practise using the IELTS Academic Writing assessment criteria to find ways to improve some writing.

Imagine your friend or classmate has shown you the piece of writing below, and they have asked you to help improve it. It’s an answer to the task you saw in Step 1.15.

How could this writing be improved? What has the writer done well?

You can click the image to enlarge it. You can also click here to see the original handwriting.

Use what you’ve learned this week to help you, and write some comments below. Please be friendly – this writing was written by a real person, and that person may read your comments!

When you come back next week, we’ll show you an examiner’s comments on this writing.