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Gina gets some feedback

Gina receives some feedback for her initial daft.

In this video a university lecturer is giving Gina feedback on her first draft.

  • What do you think were the most useful comments that Gina received on her draft?
  • If you were Gina would you now be able to write a better personal statement?
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