junior moyo
i am a lady aged 26 ,light in complexion and a University graduate
Location I live in Zimbabwe,
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Hoi'. Ik woon in Zimbabwe. We have hot mornings and nights , but due to global warming we now experiencing rain anytime of the year. But all in all its always sunny and hot
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only got one phrase
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Add a comment...Hallo, mijn naam is Junior. Your Dutch is good. Would you help me better mine
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Hallo, mijn naam is Junior Moyo, ik kom uit Zimbabwe
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junior moyo replied to Tessa Daras
Add a comment...wow you good are you Dutch speaking maybe you can help me with it
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Hallo, mijn ma'am is Junior Moyo.
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the course was very useful.thank you.
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junior moyo made a comment
mine weren't exactly 350, i exceeded with 3 words
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thus my essay .thank you for all
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junior moyo made a comment
Well i had two feed backs, and my essay lacked examples. thank you guys
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i will plan on paper
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i think that all that are highlighted in black
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thank you
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Discuss the reasons why scientists and researchers should stop experimenting on animals
Introduction
- Background :animals have been used for centuries in medical research up to date.
- thesis: this essay is going to discuss the reasons these experiments should be stopped- Paragraph 1
-Paragraph leader- these experiments cause pain to the...
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Discuss the reasons why scientists and researchers should stop experimenting with animals during their research
-these experiments cause pain to animals
- they are morally wrong
- they reduce the quality of life to animals
-they should use some alternative methods by replacing experiments
-reduce the number of animals use in experiments -
junior moyo replied to junior moyo
thank you
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The reasons why people live in my home town.
Gokwe is a very small town.it is furnished with good houses and most of the people there are religious.It has shopping malls ,banks,and good schools.This essay shall therefore, discuss the farming and business reasons that motiviated most people to live here.
There are good soils surrounding Gokwe, and...
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junior moyo made a comment
now this is getting more complex and serious
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There are different languages in my home town , there is a language that most people use ,this is Shona. Gokwe town is a small town ,but there are a lot of buildings ,and there is a one big post office building and a government complex, there are many shopping malls and there is a very small farmers square where they sell their produce everyday.
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junior moyo made a comment
the exercise was good
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you right buddy ,i am too
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junior moyo made a comment
i think i need that too Ghai
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this is going to be interesting,last did this a long time ago
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that will be my topic
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discuss the reasons why scientists and researchers should be stopped in experimenting with animals.
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hey its Moyo not mayo Sayeedy
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i meant english before now, now its exciting because of new ideas on how to write good english
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keep nailing it ey
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am happy that i nailed it
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i got that ,its easy now ,anyone can can write a good essay from this block
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thats a nice and accurate,from my learner's pespective i guess you nailed it
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the question of the essay its the title
from Reading-social circle( backgrnd)
[thesis].....this essay
[para1.].....reading offers the opp for good work...
[para1body]...from body-the end of the paragrap{para2}......come to study -the end of the sentence
{para2body}.........from they may to the end of the paragraph{conlusionsummary}.....from...
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yeah its quite interesting
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junior moyo made a comment
wow i liked the part with the conclusion ,i have always thought that the conclusion is there to summaries, now i know you give recommendations or predictions .
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Zimbabwe in the past has been characterized with less cars. People used to travel with bicycles, scotch-carts to travel long distances and even used wagons pulled by pair ox or of donkeys . Most of the poor families could walk longer distances from one area to another. The cars were owned by the rich in the society and. Aslo the society only new that only men...
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1: people's lives were bad- because of the second world war......therefore it caused the country to be poor.
2: china industrialized ...leading to creation off jobs opportunities
3: improving the education sector......introduction of international languages.....and bieng part of the globalization.
4:Introduction of new customs....doing away with the old and... -
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he has improved in content,he was able to develop an idea and expand it,his paragraphing and phrasing improved very well, he was able to organise his ideas from the past to the present,his language improved though there are some mistakes in it
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junior moyo made a comment
there is a lot of grammatical errors in his essay as you have pointed out
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junior moyo made a comment
thank you ,i now see what he did
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junior moyo made a comment
his first attempt was poor in everything
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thats a good essay ,
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Zimbabwe has always been engaged in different economic breakdown from the past ,it was once been the bread-bone of Africa, but now it is one of the poorest countries i have ever known in the history of the world. It was fairly well developed in agricultural and industrial sectors, it produced range of goods in a number of industries. Agriculture was...
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the first time i had this i thought it was boring ,
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academic writing is different from the other writing we used to write in high school,or the ones we write when sending emails to friends and family
it has its own style of writing,it has order,it follows a certain criteria and it is also governed by rules.there is also a point when you are supposed to cite your work ,showing the reader that you borrowed the...
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I have found that English is quiet a complicated language especially as an academic language. It is easy to say, when you are around friends and family, but when asked to write ,good English on paper you find out that there will be a lot of misrepresentation of words, therefore i can conclude that my experience has been a tough one.
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i can say Xiao had improved a lot in his second essay ,especially on the content and how he links his points and how he's able to put togather his points...but i think his grammar was still very bad. too many grammatical errors